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Blog EntryAPRIL HUSHJun 5, '08 3:00 PM
for everyone

this poem is dedicated to my april hush:

 

 

white lights, they dull in your shine.

spring don't even come close in your warmth.

bright eyes, they kept my heart in line.

the wind can't free me like you do.

 

touch my lips.

silence my beating heart,

ravish these lips 

they yearn to be yours.

wrap me in your arms,

fill me with your lust.

 

in a dream that's made for two,

i wanna be yours to keep.

use me, hold me, touch me,

i need that fire.

that passion, that need where you'll never let me go.

 

calm this empty desire.

make sense of this thirst

give faith to this desperation,

flood this hunger,

sedate my aching heart.

 

keep me inside,

block my eyes, my heart and my soul.

never let the light touch my skin.

leave me in the darkness,

for the light will tell me its over.

you're gone.

 

 

oh april hush, leave me be.

never let spring come to an end.

 

 

 

 

p.s.

yesterday, an internet host contacted me and informed me my site has reached its limit and my site,temporarily, was shut down 

and, yes, i've exceeded my bandwidth. thank you for those who visited my site non-stop and to those who left their footprints (comments), i am very grateful.

the worst is yet to come and i am still waiting for the storm to come and end it all; the pain and the suffering.

i am alone in my battle and their spears have left me wounded and down. but they will never stop me. as long as i have sunshine to come home to, no arrows, no bullets, no knives will put me to rest.

 

a million thanks, hugs and kisses.

 

© Copyright 2008 Carlyn Santos


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competitivecarlyn wrote on Jun 6
max i think we should pass our pieces in fictionpress.com
whack7411 wrote on Jun 6
i soo love the fourth stanza...words used are so strong and striking..i can almost feel it....

there is no better feeling than being in love..as passion's flame endears...and girl i really felt it here!!!

one hella good job, cheng... :)
whack7411 wrote on Jun 6
all the feeling one wants to keep is love and the way this is portrayed here, you want it to stay forever..

like not letting the sun go down on you...
whack7411 wrote on Jun 6
indeed it does shed some light that nobody's a hopeless case in love...this really spells ones faith and genuine belief in a feeling of which nothing is explained, only shown in deep action....

love it!!! :)
competitivecarlyn wrote on Jun 6
haha maxine libog yan haha.. slep
thecathydiaries wrote on Jun 6
i like how its not all literal. gusto mo ako din.

cactus. pierce me pierce me and leave me.

pain

SLEP!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pinilit
competitivecarlyn wrote on Jun 6
mile cactus ba yung lalaking my kahoy sa leeg???
thecathydiaries wrote on Jun 6
haha slep hindi siya ang opium ko SLEPPPP!
competitivecarlyn wrote on Jun 6
ay ganun sino??? uhmmm chang chang chang ba?
thecathydiaries wrote on Jun 6
haha si chang siya ang ano ko.... cherub slep!
competitivecarlyn wrote on Jun 6
cherub? haha pano sya naging anghel mukha syang malibog na asiano
thecathydiaries wrote on Jun 6
ay ...s...super? talaga? SLEP NATUWA AKO HAHAHA!
competitivecarlyn wrote on Jun 6
bakit? gusto mo ba ng lalaking lalaspagin ka sa kama at sa stage?
richardssassykitty wrote on Jun 9
I really like it and I especially love the last two lines! I'm a part of writersblock here on Multiply. It's a great group which offers picture challenges bi weekly and you have to write according to what you see in the picture. If you want, just go to my groups and you can visit and join the groups from there :-)
competitivecarlyn wrote on Jun 9
cool, ill do that. :P
stillwandering wrote on Jun 10
I love it, the last two lines are great!
raj7885 wrote on Jun 10
I was thinking that you love this person! The word 'lust' does not fit! Otherwise delightful!
competitivecarlyn wrote on Jun 10
raj, well, write now i don't know if i love this person or if i'm just lusting over him
competitivecarlyn wrote on Jun 10
stillwandering, hi, how are you?
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