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Blog EntryHeightened IndulgencesJun 11, '08 12:28 AM
for everyone

 

 

 wallow in your hands.

grovel at your feet,

 care not of the repurcussions of our little fleet.

in the ocean of lust and pleasure,

we sail thru the treacherous waves.

 

skin to skin

carnal hands, bound me with your spell.

graze me with your trap,

i need to feel you breathless

sedated to the line that seperates life and death.

 

 

envelope me in your most ardent desire,

fill me with your lecherous fancy.

i lay helpless and weak;

 abandoned by morality,

i submit to your every symmetry.

touch me, feel me, mock me

use me

this heightened indulgences is all that matters. 

this moment, at this stage that's made for two

no god,

no saint can tell me this is wrong.

 

 

 

 slumber and ease the flames,

another day of sin and wickedness have passed.

for the next hour is our downfall,

shamefaced and contrite,

we pretend like nothing has transpired.   

and still i pray for affinity,

for this tryst to never end.

 

 

naked and consumed,

we face tomorrow with a hunger,

a thirst that will dim our conscience

and plunge us to napoleon's waterloo.


 

 

 

 

 

© Copyright 2008 Carlyn Santos

 

 

p.s.

 

dedicated to my heigthened indulgences

this is the most personal poem i've written in years.

 

 


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stillwandering wrote on Jun 11
Lovely poem, but why is it wicked :) Sounds like the most natural beautiful thing on earth to me ;)
judyette wrote on Jun 11
very cool poem!!!
scribe5 wrote on Jun 11
good job. it certainly got my attention!
competitivecarlyn wrote on Jun 11
thank you. haha i hope it got your attention in a good way :)
competitivecarlyn wrote on Jun 11
judyette, thank you.
competitivecarlyn wrote on Jun 11
stll wondering, i think its wicked coz they're just hurting each other. i mean, if they like it each other so much why not just be together.
whack7411 wrote on Jun 11
felt almost too real...like something's wanting to grabe me and use me in a most futile way..
whack7411 wrote on Jun 11
im liking this one too... :D
competitivecarlyn wrote on Jun 12
haha thanks master maxine... of course i'm really feeling the heat the past few days...
whack7411 wrote on Jun 12
friend favor? im not comfy with the 'master' gig...
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whack7411 wrote on Jun 12
sounds great! you have created something that big :)
competitivecarlyn wrote on Jun 12
haha its a human being
whack7411 wrote on Jun 12
oh sorry someone pala slep!
competitivecarlyn wrote on Jun 12
haha maxine maxine maxine magsulat ka na... miss ko na poems mo!
whack7411 wrote on Jun 12
ano beh pwedeng wag muna haha
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